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by Larry Bryant
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William Barry Eggington:
Elbow pops. . could use a lot more work.
Could be good with some improvements. Right now it is too much pose to pose, especially the first guy. More inbetweens + ease in and out would be good.
It needs more attention. Get in there play with the voice 2 there is a lot of twinning the arms in this competition
Janice Quinteros Wachtendorff:
El movimiento de los lapices esta de sobra, el golpe se ve lento y no daría para mover los lapices
Animator: Larry Bryant
Description: A business man tells his boss about how prepared his is to take over the busines.
Experience: 1 year currently enrolled student
Time taken: 2 weeks