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Would have been cool to see a 360 degree cam movement w/ both of them talking (maybe slow down the camera movement a bit to ensure the second speaker is seen thoroughly). The jump cut causes it to look funny, so that may be something you might want to look into improving.
First guy is pretty good. Second guy doesn't really do much of anything. It would have made all the difference if he'd tilted his head or something before the last line.
Cut down on the camera movement- it distracts from the animation. Also work on more general motion. The body of a character shouldn't be completely still while they're speaking. Pretty good lip syncing though.
I like the rotation of the camera
William Barry Eggington:
Not a fan of the camera work. Especially with the noisy carpet being destroyed by the codec compression.
Animator: Jaimee Cowart
Description: i am a game design student and this is my 3d animation 1 final more criticism the better
Time taken: animation took like 6hours everything else took all last week and the beginning week of nov