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Advice giving mouse
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to much overlap but nice idea and cute mouse i like that when he say abit of advice "
I think there's too much overlap on the mouth. Also whens he's taking a breath at the beginning the mouth is opened too wide. Nice drawing.
The mouse looks a bit too exaggerated and springy, and the cat isn't really moving much. It would of also helped if we were able to see the cat's face after hearing the mouse's advice.
Nice animation of the rat, but the cat's arm and paw should have had some movement as well. Visible breathing at the stomach too.
you know that this big arm is too stiff
JONG H. GOH:
I like the mouse action, but the tiger's hand is so still that I look at it as some kind of craft made.
Very over-animated but it works with the style. Your cat should have had some movement too.
Animator: Ozan Danger Drøsdal
Description: Our hero, Random mouse #47 is trying to save his skin with some chit chat.
Experience: 3 years student. 1 year in the real world.
Time taken: 10 hours. Most of it on cleaning up the animation.