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A bit of advice
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Really strong! I love this! So entertaining. Good job!
Too many gestures, consider removing a few. Also add more variety in poses. The hands coming together happens to frequently and not always on the right beats.
nice fluid gestures
Like the amount of connection the character is making with the off screen one. Maybe a tad too much hand motion but well done.
a lot of repetitive poses
Great first part, second part less good
hands are moving a bit too much may be..
very nice animation though
Nice aniation. It would be more powerful if you explore non repetitive actions and make some accent in pauses
JONG H. GOH:
maybe some overlapping needed
Animator: Stephane Sourdeval
Description: A man give an advice!
Experience: 1 year as student
Time taken: around 2 weeks