Final Rating: 3.01. Finished 186 out of 238 entries.

417 views including the voting period.


Animator: Paul Boogaards

Description: A person lectures another person when she wanted nothing to do with him.

Experience: 5 years of animation school, 4 years of Art school and two years of acting classes.

Time taken: A little bit each week


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Diggin the scene, but the GUY line is being fed to a female and the lip sync seems off.


Keep practicing. Pay attention to your arcs.

Amartya Mukherji:

Lacks fundamentals

Reginald Crumpler:

Decent lip sync, but the figures' movements made them seem like puppets on string.

Mark Laipnieks:

If the clip allows it, I think you should only focus on one character. Shoot video reference. Make notes, sketches. Lock down your key poses first.


stick upon basic principles anyway good attempt!!

Benjamin Berg:

This animation needs a lot of work. It is lacking the funamentals. I would advise you to go watch some videos on the internet or go to your local bookstore and see if you can find anything on animation. Good luck!