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A bit of advise?
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Diggin the scene, but the GUY line is being fed to a female and the lip sync seems off.
Keep practicing. Pay attention to your arcs.
Decent lip sync, but the figures' movements made them seem like puppets on string.
If the clip allows it, I think you should only focus on one character. Shoot video reference. Make notes, sketches. Lock down your key poses first.
stick upon basic principles anyway good attempt!!
This animation needs a lot of work. It is lacking the funamentals. I would advise you to go watch some videos on the internet or go to your local bookstore and see if you can find anything on animation. Good luck!
Animator: Paul Boogaards
Description: A person lectures another person when she wanted nothing to do with him.
Experience: 5 years of animation school, 4 years of Art school and two years of acting classes.
Time taken: A little bit each week