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Good idea, but more work with the figure should have been done. Really hard to follow lip movement on such a tiny, and pure white inside and out figure.
You should tilt the monitor a bit so we can read what the ugly girl is trying to say. 'Removed' is clear, but I'm not sure why he's upset.
JONG H. GOH:
I guess Norman could have bent his knees down at the end of the scene
Description: a man's conscience
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: about 1 week