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November 11 Second Club Final

by Ben LaScala

Final Rating: 3.94. Finished 131 out of 238 entries.

413 views including the voting period.


Animator: Ben LaScala

Description: Boss gives his employee a word of advice.

Experience: 3 years of Schooling

Time taken: 30 hours total over a week


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Austin Hambrick:

the ending shows a good emotion of anger though if anything needs to be improved would be the mouth motions. more fluid movements can go along way. also don't know if its just me but the characters head seems to jump a bit around frame 60ish i realize this is to emphasize "bit" but it seems too extreme.

Katie Wyman:

If there's a second character in the room I feel like your animated character could have made stronger eye-contact with him/her. Some movements are a bit stiff but overall you lip-sink looks good and I like your key poses. Your key poses are not over the top, which is good, but movement between them could have just been smoother.

Richard Carrillo:

What does he look at so much at that cigarrete or pencil or whatever? Eyes are very important to direct our attention and if it takes us to something irrelevant like the cigarrete, there's something wrong.
Anyways GJ but try working in your staging.

Reginald Crumpler:

Great lip sync, rig control, and facial expressions! : )