Final Rating: 5.32. Finished 60 out of 238 entries.

469 views including the voting period.


Animator: Pedro Mello

Description: I explored the dialogue by making a 2D animation of a Father giving advice to his young and grumpy son

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 18 days


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Leonardo Pereira:

Nice style. The lip sync is really off in some parts.

Alex Sinclair:

Like the lighting style you've gone with, and the emotion of the father's movements are believable. Some additional animation on the child after hearing his father's advice would have helped him seem more emotive as well.

Reginald Crumpler:

Beautiful work. Situation was perfect for the dialogue.

Sajjad Afzal:

This is the winner entry so far

Eleftherios Kokkinakis:

The only finished 2D this month. Looking good. I would like to see some reaction on the kid too though.

Filipe Pedrosa:

The animation itself is not bad at all, but the composition takes away from it, in my opinion. Most of the movement happens in the upper left and the eye is not draw there at all. Bring them closer together and adjusting the camera so it focuses better on them would be a big improvement, I think.

Jyrki Kanto:

This looks good! There were just some annoying pops, like the shoulder at 157-160.
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