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Camera's making weird moves.
Be careful when moving the camera too much. It feels unmotivated here, and is a bit distracting.
Check your keys on the camera animation.
teh camera movement is weird
Be careful to your cam mouvement. Keep it simple
That camera move is really distracting and unnecessary. It "yo-yos" which is a huge no no
I like the poses, but he doesn't look like he's actually looking at Eleven.
A background and set would have made it awesome.
JONG H. GOH:
I like the facial of the little one. but seems weird how he can slide his face regardless of the hands, around frame 70
The camera makes some unnecessary moves, and without any background it seems like the characters are just floating around. The poses work pretty well though.
Poor cameraman just spoiled half of the animation.
Animator: Marianna Guajardo
Description: This little kid doesn't like to be told what to do
Experience: 4 months
Time taken: 30 hours