Final Rating: 6.10. Finished 28 out of 238 entries.

788 views including the voting period.


Animator: Juaner Franzius

Description: A father talking straight to the eyes of his teenager son.

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: a week and a half


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Mariana Avila:

Animation is really good, but the scenario is kinda dull in comparison.

Paula Decanini:

Mustache stroking is good. Doesn't hit the emphasis on "bit", and hits too hard on "never".

Diane Aarts:


Luis Trebino:

too many poses

Alex Sinclair:

The overall animation is quite good, though that face he holds at the end kinda rubs me the wrong way...


what is the story ?


Really nice! I love how fluid the motion is. The motion and details for how he handles his glasses are really nice.

Amartya Mukherji:

lip sync is off, - specially at the end section.

Interesting animation though

Richard Carrillo:

Why the smile?

Katie Wyman:

Some people might say that the character was over animated, but that's entirely a stylistic choice. Personally I really like it! What you have flows really nicely, and the way your character's body moves between gestures looks really natural. The lighting is also very good. I do feel like your character's personality changed a lot through the shot. Weather that was deliberate or not I don't know, but you should make sure that was a conscious choice when animating him.