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good staging needed
JONG H. GOH:
The first shot needs to be longer, I guess. At first I thought the shot was there by mistake 'cause it went too fast.
Funny, good situation that fit the audio, nicely drawn and animated. Just a bit of work on lip syncing though.
Michael Ayers Jr:
On shot 1,2 and 3, the character should not be in the dead center of the screen according to the rule of thirds.
I really like the idea, but if you could just combine your drawing skills with the fundamentals of animation, this could be so much better.
Animator: Joaquín Arechavala
Description: Animation about a young skinny cadet that threatens his stronger and bigger superior officer, but when he sees the weapon he´s carrying, the young cadet regrets his decision and smiles, acting like it was just a joke.
Experience: 1 year
Time taken: 4 days