Final Rating: 3.58. Finished 152 out of 238 entries.

407 views including the voting period.


Animator: Joaquín Arechavala

Description: Animation about a young skinny cadet that threatens his stronger and bigger superior officer, but when he sees the weapon he´s carrying, the young cadet regrets his decision and smiles, acting like it was just a joke.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 4 days


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ibet francisco:

good staging needed


The first shot needs to be longer, I guess. At first I thought the shot was there by mistake 'cause it went too fast.

Reginald Crumpler:

Funny, good situation that fit the audio, nicely drawn and animated. Just a bit of work on lip syncing though.

Michael Ayers Jr:

On shot 1,2 and 3, the character should not be in the dead center of the screen according to the rule of thirds.

Jesse Angri:

I really like the idea, but if you could just combine your drawing skills with the fundamentals of animation, this could be so much better.