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Villain and Capture
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i like the animation on the guy talking, but the other guy just seems to be frozen, no expressions or moving his head when the audio starts
This would be so much strong without the film gate and with a proper backdrop. Still Great Animation work!
Animation was decent, but it all felt very cliched. From the poses to the expressions.
There's quite a bit of nice drag and good poses in this animation. The walk that starts at frame 193 needs some work though. It feels way too snappy and I don't see much up and down. It feel like he is on a scooter(?)
I could maybe see a cartoony animal or bouncy girl walking like that, but not an old man. In general his movements are a bit much for such an old guy, although that is a matter of opinion, I guess. Also it's a shame the other guy doesn't have much animation aside from the beginning.
I like the character's emotions. You have clear emotions, but some of the movements (especially in the talking character) seemed a bit too jolted. His had also felt like it was glued behind his back, rather then being held behind his back. I get that he was hiding the button, but I still feel like it could have had a bit more movement to it. The lip since works well.
Vice the motions of the prof
JONG H. GOH:
is the guy dead? but I like the facial expression of the old man.
Interesting, and I get the quirky inventor thing now too.
I can't figure out the connection with the acting and the sound, but good animation nonetheless!
an old person wont act like that.....wud have been fine on a young or middle-sgaed guy....the walk also needs to be refined
Animator: Kenn Mitchell
Description: Malcom is captured! Is there a way to free him?
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