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Test amination for class
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rated not ready because the camera and the quality is too far and too fuzzy to make out anything to critique with any accuracy.
Pull the camera in to frame your subject better.
Decent lip sync. Just wish there was a scene to go with it.
there was a far far away tv series...wink
Why is the character so far away?
i didn't understand why he is so far...
The character's movements seem to be a good start but the camera is WAAAY to far away from the character. Look up the "Rule of Thirds" to help you out. I cannot offer any criticism on the lip sync because of the framed shot.
JONG H. GOH:
the camera frame is too small, can't see much.
I think the camera was too close to your character..
I'd love to have the camera closer to the guy.
Animator: Trevor Rodman
Description: The final project for an intro to animation class. Still have two weeks to work on details.
Experience: This semester
Time taken: 2-3 hours