Final Rating: 2.71. Finished 207 out of 238 entries.

412 views including the voting period.


Animator: Cole Condict

Description: Young kid gets frustrated because an old pro keeps taking all his money...then makes the mistake of losing his car

Experience: 8 weeks

Time taken: a couple weeks


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Piotr Skulimowski:

Not a bad story, but you lack fundamentals. Search for 12 basic rules of animation.

Sajjad Afzal:

Camera movement is distracting



Reginald Crumpler:

Good situation, but the character speaking had no facial expressions. Especially with him having a winning hand.

Sergio Candela Ramirez:

I dont like the camera choices that you made, I didnt understand anything almost until the end. But good job!!


i don't think you need those camera moves (dolly, dolly zoom, pan ...ect) Thay don't bring anything to the scene (perhaps even distract viewers)

Benjamin Berg:

A couple of big problems here. The first one I noticed right away was the camera. For a scene like this, you'll only want to have a maximum of two cuts and remove camera animation. The second biggest problem is your acting. The poses in the characters don't feel natural. I would recommend taking some video reference to work from.

Keep up the hard work!