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Lovely. Maybe at the beginning are too stiff, but lovely acting!!!
I liked the hair floppy-s.
The emotions of the characters read clearly, and I like the acting animation of the speaker. Probably my biggest problem with this is just the camera framing. Maybe not so straight-on? Also you should always try to avoid cutting off your subjects mid-thigh. Keep it at the hips or the knees.
The hair movement is really good, congrats on that.
Good interaction, like that you took the other guy through a change in emotion
Top 5 no doubt!
very believable, i learned a lesson :)
You have a clear situation and you are one of the few who don't put a cigarrete or something in the hand of the speaker flying all over the place.
very nice acting......him going out in the end looks floaty....the walk should have up & down
nice work here!
If there is something that I saw in this entry that has stood out from all others I have seen, is acknowledging the character's breaths. Also, this entry is great proof that great animation doesn't mean a LOT of moment. There's so much going on this scene, really gives me the vibe it belongs in a greater plot. Excellent work pal!!!
JONG H. GOH:
nice animation, facial is also nice
nice. the expression change before he starts speaking is cool
beautiful animation, for me you are the best of the month ! congrats
looks like somebody's sent packing ... a good job... i mean animating...lol
The acting in this shot is good. The two biggest problems I can see is that the right guy's body is way too still and feels frozen. The other thing is the eyebrows on the left character are too floaty.
Keep up the hard work!
Animator: Eike Hoppmann
Description: 2 officeworkers in an elevator, one is fired and receives (unneeded) advice.
Experience: few years
Time taken: 10-20 hours...