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Advice by phone
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good animation in there
Not enough arches and expressiveness. Feels too mechanical.
He doesn't need to lift his right hand when he says, "you should never". Looks great otherwise.
Nice shot, just an observation: If he is waiting for someone to answer, would he actually start by saying "you mind if I give you..." ? Think about when you make a call.. you don't instantly go to the subject, you salute or something.
Description: Advice by phone to his friend
Experience: 5 year
Time taken: 4 days