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Derek's got some advice.

by Jim Forsyth

Final Rating: 3.22. Finished 177 out of 238 entries.

428 views including the voting period.


Animator: Jim Forsyth

Description: Derek's GOT some advice.

Experience: 1 year student.

Time taken: About a week


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Paula Decanini:

There was no emotion or expression conveyed in this. The character looks nice, but nothing really happened.

Reginald Crumpler:

Okay lip sync. Needed a bit more movement of the body.

Filipe Pedrosa:

The biggest problem is that I cannot tell the story behind the animation. No idea how the dialogue relates to what you did.

I like the bunny slippers and the dog's pose, it has potential for character. Just remember to consider the story, the context, when you animate/draw anything.

Alex Sinclair:

The art style has promise, but the animation is too static to support it.