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Derek's got some advice.
by Jim Forsyth
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There was no emotion or expression conveyed in this. The character looks nice, but nothing really happened.
Okay lip sync. Needed a bit more movement of the body.
The biggest problem is that I cannot tell the story behind the animation. No idea how the dialogue relates to what you did.
I like the bunny slippers and the dog's pose, it has potential for character. Just remember to consider the story, the context, when you animate/draw anything.
The art style has promise, but the animation is too static to support it.
Animator: Jim Forsyth
Description: Derek's GOT some advice.
Experience: 1 year student.
Time taken: About a week