Samantha Koffler:

Super sweet--I love how the couple is acting towards one another. Many little movements that bring these two to life. Great job!!

Nkosi:

The lip sync is good, but body needs work on the timing

Shanon McNeil:

I really like all the different acting cues in this one with both characters! The way he flicks the rose away, does that little shake/shrug after she pushes his shoulder, it sells the character's age in a way, it feels like a middle to older aged gentleman whose sort of been through it and is over it. And the lady, her enthusiasm feels reel and I really like how at the end she puts the phone down as she is feeling a type of pity(?) and wants to devote him her full attention now. My critique is that sometimes my eye doesn't know where to go, maybe try staging the timing a little better where we see one main action at a time rather than both characters doing large and competing actions at the same time. Also, check some of your arcs and slow ins and slow outs, movements sometimes feel a bit robotic and could be helped by playing with those curves and timing.