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Animator: dog my cats

Description: 一个小孩和一个大人的对话

Experience: 大二学生

Time taken: 14天

Comments:

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John M:

Characters are too static.

Parker Rodormer:

The Mom blinks too much. The girl doesn’t blink at all.

Richard Adams:

Common problem this month, nothing actually moves except mouth and eyes. Look up "12 Principles of Animation". Very appealing drawing and coloring, though.

Armando:

The camera cut breaks the 180 Degree Rule (Crosses the line).

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/180-degree_rule

https://www.mediacollege.com/video/editing/transition/reverse-cut.html