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Twins Bonding

by Nuel

Final Rating: 2.23. Finished 193 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Nuel

Description: One of the twins is having problems and the other is trying to console him

Experience: Beginner

Time taken: One day


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Kyra Simone:

You time the words and head movement pretty decently. But some points, specially around 186 and 265, seem really jaggety and don't fit the dialogue. Try to make it more like the movement from to 217 to 240.. Subtle enough not to be jarring, but present enough to notice.

Abisayo O:

No lip movement? Even if that was the concept, then the facial expressions (cos am not seeing the hand movements too) should be way more expressive than that to compensate.