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Sorry You Got Freaked Out OK?

by Adam O

Final Rating: 3.54. Finished 105 out of 201 entries.

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Animator: Adam O

Description: Two manly adult men talk about their feelings, developing a bond completely oblivious to their female sounding voices.

Experience: 2 semesters of school for Maya

Time taken: 4 weeks


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Richard Adams:

It just feels very stiff and robotic. The bodies just don't move much. Go look up "The 12 Principles of Animation". Mostly needs polishing to loosen up the movements and make it feel more organic and alive.

Kyra Simone:

Nice expressions! The second character seems more balanced than the first, with well-executed hand movements. Pay attention to where the second character's feet are. Seems like he slid around at 'Thank you very much'.

Jaime Santana:

There's not an idea going on, but it looks like you had fun getting lip sync down and some body expressions.