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Animator: Shobhit Sharma

Description: Completed this animation in 3-4 days i am still learning character animation. I hope you will like it

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 3 Days

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Paul Essenhigh:


Jamie F:

Try not to let all body parts start and stop at the same time, with the same spacing and timing. You'll get a more natural feel.

Macon Akpobo:

Good.

Armando:

There is a lot of twinning in both character's actions.

https://blog.animationmentor.com/twinning-and-why-you-should-usually-avoid-it/

Ying Herng Chia:

Adding more subtle poses to the fingers will make things feel more organic and believable.

Jenn Byrd:

The body gestures are great, spot on! Would like to see more expressive facial animation. The eyes, eyebrows are pretty stiff right now.

Jaime Santana:

A little stiff but alright. Too dim as well.