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De-stress with a dough

by javiera molina

Final Rating: 3.65. Finished 117 out of 185 entries.

381 views including the voting period.


Animator: javiera molina

Description: A lazy baker asks his stressed friend for his old job

Experience: Second year student of Digital Animation

Time taken: Approximate 20 days


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Wai Han Lau:

loving this, you really feel the dough under the man's weight! The first shot is a bit confusing and unclear, I assume that's the other man spinning his can? This shot looks like the man is above and close to the baker's left, then the next shot shows him on the behind-right of the baker. I suggest mapping out your staging from the top view, pretend like it's actors in a play. I would also like to add that I like the movement of frame 259 (where he smashes the dough) and the slight jump of the secondary character, but I feel like this isn't true to the audio and feels a bit out of place. Overall, it's very good! Keep going!

Ruben Uggla:

It is really good, it just feels a bit unfinished. Still kinda nice animation.

Shiladitto Gupto:

too much of shoulder movements.. looks a bit unnatural..