Final Rating: 5.24. Finished 39 out of 185 entries.

412 views including the voting period.



Description: Time to leave the canning factory.

Experience: 9 months as a student

Time taken: 1 month


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Maybe the setting isn't the best, it feels awkward and the composition doesn't help much to convey the "dialogue" feeling. Acting wise, I felt the action around the frame 220 a bit weird. Besides that, the acting is really expressive and has a lot of little nuances that felt really charming. Keep up the hard work and hope you can continue to improve later on!

Richard Adams:

Good movements, bad acting, if that makes sense to you. Study acting. Perhaps a book like "Acting for Animators" might help you. Your staging and rendering is excellent, and you've mastered how to get natural lifelike movements. Beautiful to look at. The next level is acting.


good acting