Michaela Dawn:

Even though it's in stepped, the point is very apparent and the poses all make sense and don't seem like they move hastily. Timing is great. Keep working on it for your portfolio.

Suyog Patil:

Nice Blocking [

Urszula Przybylska:

is it still in blocking?

Lea:

Good start! Would love to see this finished, maybe with an added bartender character for the other voice?

Shiladitto Gupto:

Try to make better poses next time.. the timing looks ok.. but the poses doesn't have that much appeal.. they look a bit weak.. make them stronger and more appealing..

Ivan Mendoza:

Good job! Demo reel material. Just finish it up. It's hard to tell where the bar tender is standing though. He looks all over the place.

Meike:

I think this could be quite good but it's still in blocking.. shame!

Richard Adams:

Looks like this is still in blocking stage.