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Canned food factory

by Brittany peet

Final Rating: 2.70. Finished 167 out of 185 entries.

334 views including the voting period.


Animator: Brittany peet

Description: The real reason he opened a bakery.

Experience: 3 years

Time taken: 3weeks


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Richard Adams:

The startlement at hearing the word "dying" really lacks believability, especially as it's obvious he doesn't mean an actual physical death. The extraneous scenes and characters also hurt this entry. Also keep the camera static. You want the focus to be on the two main characters, not on distracting camera movements. For non-experts, moving the camera usually hurts a lot more than it helps.