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Funny characters! Appears to be well thought about and intentional. I will say some of the gestures seem to be un-natural for the characters. FUN! love the art style.
Nice work! The writing on the chalk board is a bit tought to read.
Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:
Lozzer86, a good job as always
thanks for not packing so much info to only 11 second clip this time.
I've got impression that you always want to tell a story with that british humour
(it is hard to do so in 11s) btw no bad those british teeth ....LOL
but those writing on the walls are hard to read (especially on a dark blackboard)
when watching animation just in ONE GO.
I had to watch again to get the writing on the wall ...lol
One more thing Lozzer86 those straight b/g lines don't go well with your
animation style (imao) perhaps if you make them a bit wobbly they would
look from the same world as your animation.
(just a suggestion).
good work,well done
Sergio Candela Ramirez:
Animator: Lauren Elizabeth MacColl
Description: Don't miss classes at chicken school. Or you're clucked.
Experience: 5 years, BA Hons.
Time taken: 2 weeks.