Final Rating: 3.37. Finished 98 out of 205 entries.

475 views including the voting period.


Animator: Bradley Adams

Description: I feel that the animation is ok but the scene shots and camera work is quite poor. But it was definitely a fun and good learning practice in doing this and I look forward to next months where I will plan it better.

Experience: Just over a year.

Time taken: just over a week whenever I had time


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

James Trimm:

good stuff, too much movement maybe causing problems

Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!

Ben Smith:

Hi, animation actions are smooth. Good work. Nice actions. Think really hard about what actions go with the audio.