Final Rating: 6.64. Finished 9 out of 205 entries.

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Animator: Jone Skjaerpe

Description: A young pupil is introduced to his master's jams

Experience: Student for 2 years

Time taken: A couple nights


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This is superb! Great work and animation flow!

Jordan Lewers:

Oh, I'm a sucker for 2D, and your character designs and animation are really appealing! Really liking the overlap and secondary actions of the instructor, especially when he raises his hand and rolls on the floor! However, I really would've liked more setup before the dialogue began so the instructor can react to the boy's arrival a bit later, maybe show the kid trying to sneak by him or something. Regardless, this is a strong piece!

Anna Lydia Lemos:

Looks great! Very well executed. I really like the beginning. I'm not convinced by the little boy's acting though, and I'm not sure I understand why the man had to lie down or where he is pointing. Great job otherwise!

Jessica "Jess" Jerome:

very nice

Zachary Polic:

good animation. But there are a few things:
1st - crazy eyebrows! the brows should always have a sense of connectivity and flow (a line) that goes smoothly from one to the other.
2nd - that last pose the master goes into just does not make sense. A lot of people seem to be doing that with this clip. Seems like they're really pushing for humor but they end up falling flat. I think if you chose a more believable pose for that end shot this piece would be a contender.