Final Rating: 2.38. Finished 160 out of 205 entries.

478 views including the voting period.


Animator: Theron Nash

Description: A burglar breaks into a home only to find himself confronted with his "newest pupil," hungry for cookies.

Experience: 1st Class: This is my final.

Time taken: 45 Hrs


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Clark Sison:

Jumpy, but smooth as butta

Timothy Muller:

Hi there. My advice for you is to strengthen your contact poses. Practice contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep the good work up.

Eli Orr:

Both of them feel very robotic. And the pose the boy stays in looks very uncomfortable. Consider making their movements in arcs instead of pose to pose and it may have been wise to have the boy continue moving.