Final Rating: 4.23. Finished 58 out of 205 entries.

498 views including the voting period.


Animator: David Zhu

Description: A young person is looking for his new master (Maya gave up on me on the last second, I was not able to render, even though I had made everything :( )

Experience: 4 years of school and 1 year of work

Time taken: 1 Week(part time)


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Max Calderon:

too long of an establishing shot


At the beginning, when he says "You..." his lips should come out when he makes the "oo" sound, if that makes sense. Also, most of his movements are fast and kinda choppy. That might be what you were going for but I think the movements should be smoothed out. Idea was funny, poses were good, aaaaaand.... that's it :)


Old twinkle

Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!


Try to fix the right leg of the dancing master at the end, its in wierd position and there's a knee pop

Jordan Barg:

Too much movement at times. Pops as well.

Todd Christiansen:

love the Star Wars touch.

Riley Thompson:

that final pose is really bad.