by David Zhu
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too long of an establishing shot
At the beginning, when he says "You..." his lips should come out when he makes the "oo" sound, if that makes sense. Also, most of his movements are fast and kinda choppy. That might be what you were going for but I think the movements should be smoothed out. Idea was funny, poses were good, aaaaaand.... that's it :)
Old twinkle toes....lol
Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!
Try to fix the right leg of the dancing master at the end, its in wierd position and there's a knee pop
Too much movement at times. Pops as well.
love the Star Wars touch.
that final pose is really bad.
Animator: David Zhu
Description: A young person is looking for his new master (Maya gave up on me on the last second, I was not able to render, even though I had made everything :( )
Experience: 4 years of school and 1 year of work
Time taken: 1 Week(part time)