Final Rating: 5.43. Finished 49 out of 197 entries.

38 views including the voting period.


Animator: Hamid Beheshtian

Description: this is my first shot, hope you enjoy.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 2 week


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Danny Kneip:

a very clean and lovely composition, but I was hoping the female would walk into frame. His hands are pretty stiff from 270 - 317, which is unfortunate as you had great hand movements through the rest. The lip sync is very good.


First animation I see where you really feel the awkardness of the dialogue. Thanks to good staging and top animation. Especially love the smappy animation of head and eyes blinking, really fitting the rythm. But it's like you were in a hurry at the end, when the animation becomes really linear

Jesse J. Jones:

Good start, just could use a little refining to make the character really look like they are feeling and thinking. He stands quite still, just a little shift during the long pause in the middle would help, and the pose he ends up in is quite neutral and straight, even the hands are almost at neutral pose. Try posing along a definite line of action and conveying more emotion and motive behind their acting.

Colin Davey:

The ending needs some work I think. It looks a little stiff and boring. Needs more movement and expression on the face.

James Hazael:

Nice, but the character got a bit still at the end