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by Katie Spell

Final Rating: 3.03. Finished 174 out of 197 entries.

19 views including the voting period.


Animator: Katie Spell

Description: A girl wants her friend’s opinion on a love poem that she wrote for a boy she likes. The poem was so bad, her friend laughs. He tries to hide it throughout the whole thing, where she’s asking him not to tell the boy.

Experience: 6-7 Months

Time taken: 2 Weeks


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Arturo Arias:

Really, really avoid doing the same thing with both hands at the same time, like a mirror. If you overlap or just work with one hand, it would look more natural.

James Ham:

Not bad, try to improvise more arcs in the arm movements.

Jesse J. Jones:

Get those hands out of the neutral pose!! Should also compose your animation so we can read the acting better. Right now there's a lot of empty space around your character. Learn about good composition and animation fundamentals.