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Good Intentions Gone Wrong

by Alex Natali

Final Rating: 3.12. Finished 166 out of 197 entries.

50 views including the voting period.


Animator: Alex Natali

Description: A poor maidservant gets caught stealing food for her children, but someone wants to keep her wondering if she'll be turned in to face a harsh punishment.

Experience: Approximately 2 months

Time taken: Approximately 2 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Edward Chris Evjen:

The mechanics of the walk need improvement. For example the push of the leg isn't there.

Jesse J. Jones:

Walking while emoting is hard to animate. Try animating the basics first before anything advanced.

Calvin Kau:

Imaginary friends ftw

Mattie Walsh:

You've got some nice acting in the face. The body mechanics are off. It seems his feet are dragging his body, reference is your friend

Kristin Turnipseed:

Good work, the walk up could use a bit of retiming, but this isn't bad.