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he won't tell him anyway

by Arturo Arias

Final Rating: 5.28. Finished 53 out of 197 entries.

44 views including the voting period.


Animator: Arturo Arias

Description: Wanted to approach this one through a theatrical staging and a little bit of drama. The woman, who' s left on the shadows, is pretty much making the guy uncomfortable,

Experience: couple of months

Time taken: three weeks


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Dan Gold:

Amazing work


Animation is pretty good but your second character's silhouette is lost in the background shadows. Since she is basically completely in shadow herself her pose should have been very clear to read to help reinforce his dominance.

Edward Chris Evjen:

Giving him the the bottles to interact with was good. Some movements should be smoothed out. Like when he waters the plant, his hand does a slight flick. Perhaps more anticipation could help.

Cuck Man:

Didn't look that sinister as I'd expect him to be with that violin music but still pretty good

Danny Kneip:

I really enjoy the rubbery style of this model, but the lip sync here is a bit rough. The motion blur blink at 177 is distracting. The body movements are well done.

Jesse J. Jones:

It looks really good! I think your lighting is doing you a disservice though, because it blocks out your terrific lipsync around fr. 160! Great work! :)