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first 11 sec animation shot

by deepak

Final Rating: 4.47. Finished 88 out of 197 entries.

48 views including the voting period.


Animator: deepak

Description: conversation between two characters.

Experience: fresher

Time taken: 5 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Michael D. Smith:

more expression.

Ian Abel Nathaniel:

Good acting. Lack accents on lip sync.


Body and facial animations are right, your technique is good. Now, needs the sparkle of the story and a bit more animation in the eyes, and it will be perfect.

Jesse J. Jones:

Not sure that the guy's poses all work here, there's a lot of twinning and the "think" pose is pretty cliche. It's really not bad, it just needs some love. Girl clearly needs more work with the basics like anticipation and follow through and her lipsync is off.


Too many of Bishop's gestures are symmetrical.

Rob Cavallo:

AM Rig? Are they allowed?