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getting caught

by Gary

Final Rating: 3.95. Finished 115 out of 197 entries.

21 views including the voting period.


Animator: Gary

Description: Mary goes into the head office to steal top secret information, and got caught by her colleague.

Experience: student

Time taken: 8 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Jesse J. Jones:

Very floaty, it almost looks like they're underwater. Work on your timing.


The hard work is noticeable in a longer submission. The acting choices are good. After the man touches her, all the motion seems slow like it's under water or something. It's nice and smooth, but maybe let the characters reach pose faster and hold it a little longer.

Rob Cavallo:

too much in the beginning and the animation is a bit floaty. Not a bad job just needs some more work

Hannah Benbow:

I'd work on your timing a bit, everything feels like its moving in slow motion.