Final Rating: 7.12. Finished 9 out of 197 entries.

707 views including the voting period.


Animator: Keith Sizemore

Description: A woman in despair left with nothing else but to plead to her antagonist.

Experience: 4 years schooling. 2 Years Professional

Time taken: 2 Weeks


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Arik R. Morales IV:

This is excellent!

Jacob Moreno:

Wow. Demo reel piece. Good job. The story is interesting and clear, the characters are appealing, and the animation is great. You've made it very difficult to find anything that could be done to this animation. My only critique is perhaps to show more compression with the man's fingers as it goes down onto the folder. It seems to just stick as of right now. Again, great work.

Cuck Man:

Yeyyy this ones definitely one of the top ones. I love how you rendered the file red. (reminds me of Schindler's List)

Himadri Sekhar Dhali:


Daniel Vasconcellos:

cool animation, lip sinc is a bit off, congratts!

J.K. Riki:

I loved the idea of the red folder in a black and white world, but I feel like you didn't fully utilize it! It was on screen for so short of a time that it felt more distracting that "important" which is what I imagine you were going for. If you had him hold the folder higher (so it was on screen) in the last shot I think it would have sold it a little better. In a full film it would work as is, but since there's only 11 seconds we need it on screen as a focal point a bit more (in my opinion). Otherwise extremely nicely done.

Danny Kneip:

Framing and composition are super. Black and white is a nice, clean choice. The lip sync needs some polish but the performances are good overall.

Jesse J. Jones:

Terrific acting! Great job on this! :)

Sean McDonald:

This one is so good, I love it!

Sergio Barragan L:



Some of the mouth shapes seem off. The last "you" of her line the shape almost looks like a "ya," but just bringing in the corners of the mouth a little will fix that. His line, the "d" of "find" into "out", his mouth looks too open and the tongue makes it looks like it should make an "L" sound shape. Other than that, you have some good solid motion and I like what you did.

Abhik Paul:

Good expression and animation.

Hannah Benbow:

Nice staging!

Avinash Kharat:

great animation