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that's passive aggression

by Mohamad Bakri

Final Rating: 5.54. Finished 30 out of 72 entries.

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Animator: Mohamad Bakri

Description: don't tease me when i'm eating

Experience: 3 month using Maya

Time taken: 3 weeks


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Ben Zingo:

your posing and some of the ideas are really nice, but the actual animation seems lacking. Maybe focus on the splines/easing, as well as adding in anticipation, overshoot, etc

Maylin Lazarova:

the timing of the movements and poses of the character on the left need a bit more work. the storytelling works quite well.