Comments:
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Liz C. Lee:
Solid, expressive posing is needed
Establish where characters are in the scene, and when camera cuts occur
Keeping the char alive shouldn't mean having the root constantly move. Instead look into adding moving holds with proper, well established poses.
Hope these critiques help!
Animator: Quentin Colter
Description: The Ninja tries to explore the forest by himself, but Sam wants to go with him. So, the ninja is trying to talk him out of it.
Experience: 3 years still in university
Time taken: two weeks