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i like the idea and composition. i do think the character animation needs improvement
John Aurthur Mercader:
This is some amazing compositing! But this could really benefit from more blocking and better posing. But damn more practice and youll be making some amazing stuff!
Massive artistic appeal in this one. Idea works terrific, too. Perhaps the most beautiful entry this month. Animation...a bit stiff but not bad.
Miguel R. C.:
The design and style is quite nice and appealing. I would try to work more on the animation of the girl and make a bit more overlap between the different parts of her body, things seem to be moving all at the same time a bit. Nice work so far!
Love the style
Absolutely gorgeous character model and environment. The movements and easing are all really linear though which comes across as stiff and robotic, but with a little more work this could easily be an absolutely phenomenal piece of art and animation.
Description: Girl who missing someone
Experience: 8 Years
Time taken: 2 weeks (including evenings)