Final Rating: 7.97. Finished 2 out of 156 entries.

910,487 views including the voting period.


Animator: John Aurthur Mercader

Description: I wanted to go for a loss of innocence, or a broken dream sort of subtext. the contrast with the lyrics spoken in first person felt strong. had so much fun with this one! first entry ever, so I hope you guys like it!

Experience: 7 years (as a 3D Generalist)

Time taken: 5 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

YewChung Wong:

Good job on the facial! however, i think holding the handkerchief with two hand to wipe face looks a little unnatural to me.

Michael Loeck:

Great work! lots of subtle things going on here that make it stand out for me.

Daniel Vasconcellos:

Super good, great idea and execution!

Richard Adams:

This actually turned out to be maybe the single best entry this month...Top Five for sure. Hard work paid off!

Aaron James Mongcopa:

Good acting and I also like the mood of your scene.

Eli Bastiaens:

Absolutely love the acting and the staging! And the interaction between the hands and the face are really impressive!

Jamie F:


Carlos Guadarrama:

A really interesting concept!

Miguel R. C.:

I love the delicate touch that you gave to your animation, very well polished! My only comment is on the lips sync and the shapes of the mouth, I think they go too far in some parts (around 140, 210 and 246), I would tone down that a bit, it gets on the way of the mood you are trying to convey.

I also like the piece of cloth, I would love to hear how you animated that!

Edmond Toussaint:

top 3

Elisabeth Janerka:

Nice animation, but the setup doesn't make sense