Final Rating: 5.50. Finished 42 out of 283 entries.

351 views including the voting period.


Animator: Joab Torres

Description: Just my first entry

Experience: 6 months

Time taken: 3 weeks


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Eric Bai:

cup hand feels dead at times
no weight to the cup
too many beats need to simplify for instance, dips spoon in cup takes out and immediately dips back in only to pull out again
make your actions deliberate

Laajaj Nassim:

up and down too exagerated in the begening....and maybe try to work your rythm and accents..everything is moving all the time...

Sasa Rodrz:

Good idea, just try to maintain a big pose and animate secondary actions within that pose, a lot of movements distract from the audio and you can't read the character