Final Rating: 3.14. Finished 228 out of 283 entries.

471 views including the voting period.


Animator: Nicolas leal

Description: my first animation

Experience: not

Time taken: one month


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Hadas Rosen:

You're starting to het some cool acting and staging in there, but your cuts are all over the place! Keep it to 1-3 shots for something of this length!

Mostafa Barakat:

Very Blocky and no lip-sync.

Kimberly Holbrook:

Way too many cuts that disorient the viewer. It makes it difficult to watch the animation itself.

Elisabeth Janerka:

A shame it is so poorly lit. Keep it simple and maybe don't have lights in the scene


There could be a bit more lighting so it's easier to see the characters.