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yurjavinabreikdoun

by jose andres garcia

Final Rating: 3.46. Finished 195 out of 283 entries.

624 views including the voting period.

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Animator: jose andres garcia

Description: xd

Experience: 2 months

Time taken: about 6-7 hours

Comments:

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Hadas Rosen:

Frame your compositions better! I would've liked to see both of them clearly in the first shot, and maybe a reverse OTS shot for the second as opposed to a straight-on CU (confusing, since I assumed it was a close up of the guy's face from the first shot). Also, the acting is nicely blocked out! I just would've liked it fleshed out!