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The guy with a sandwich

by Marten Visser

Final Rating: 6.34. Finished 12 out of 139 entries.

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Animator: Marten Visser

Description: Come on, start that training camp!

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: Two weeks on and off


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Frank J. Warsinski:

I like this one, but it feels like it might be pushing the 180 degree rule. It's confusing as to who is talking to whom until the final shot. Not strictly an animating issue so much as a staging one.

Jason Daves:

The seated char seems a bit stiff. Try acting using the whole face, even if a little bit. The eyes perhaps. Great work.

Zach Savaglio:

10 stars! Some frames after 158 could use extra drawings. Still, very good!

Fernando Incetta:

Not bad, some of the actions are super smooth. Shot 2 should be with the guy looking to the right. Nice work.

Tyler Cernak:

Acting in the first shot is solid. It'd be nice in the second shot if the old man moved more than just his arm and head, to make it feel more natural. I'm a bit confused in the third shot; when he asks, "What, you walk around naked?" It looks like you were going for a snarky/sarcastic expression, but he ended up looking more genuinely hopeful, so maybe have another go at that facial expression.

Raevynne 'Mei' Vile:

This is amazing! I love the head movements of your characters. The blink was perfectly timed. Keep it up!