Final Rating: 3.18. Finished 116 out of 139 entries.

393 views including the voting period.


Animator: Mariana Barrón

Description: A man talking with someone on the phone

Experience: Almost a year

Time taken: 5 days


(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Zach Savaglio:

Good work! Maybe a cut to the other voice would help!

Howard Cameron:

If you kept the camera the same from F63-F225, the should would be fine :)

Fernando Incetta:

The animation is not bad, but the staging is all over the place. You don't need that many cuts, specially if they are so subtle (read about the 30 degree rule).
There is nothing in the audio that implies that the other guy is in the phone so you should have emphasize it more or work around it.