A CRIMELESS INTRUSION
by Hammad Hussain, March Competition Winner!
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Wow! winner spotted.. in all aspects.. Awesome!
it will be a winner!!
Khursheed Alam Khan:
Where he says "Barging" seems a bit late. Aside from that perfect.
I like when the guy with the cigarette sizes him up
Characters give off a really strong sense of personality through their actions and facial expressions. Lip sync could use a bit more refining, but a great piece overall
Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:
Nice job.. expecting this to be on the top five.. if not between first second and third.. the only thing which I noticed is the continuity break when the character clears the smoke.. in the previous shot the hand was down but suddenly it went up..
wow it looks great. finally I like it
Great stuff, puff seems forced and fast though, although I see what you were going for.
Its one of the best short I have seen.
Love that you used the exhale at 190 for exhaling smoke. Great shot overall :)
Animator: Hammad Hussain
Description: A tiny conversation between a light-minded boy and some convicted smuggler.
Experience: 7.5 Years
Time taken: 3 Weeks