by Jabir Dz
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Craig Joseph Massa:
Love the movements of the characters! VERY well done.
I think the camera moves around a bit too much though... Disorienting at times. I think the scene would have been fine if there wasn't any cuts, just the 1 scene.
You have a really good grasp of fluidity in your movements, particularly when the girl on the left punches Bonnie's cheeks! Bonnie, however, rocks back and forth a bit too much in the beginning, with the poses feeling redundant
Gaucelm De Villaret:
Characters are more like bouncing and moving from one pose to the other quickly... feels unnatural and kinda forced.
Iqtidar Ali Siddiqui:
Looks like the girl is in The Life Aquatic outfit :)
Excellent timing and acting..keep going
Good work! It needs tome tweaking here and there bit overall is a solid piece of animations. Congratulations.
The camera cuts are distracting. They disrupt the flow of the piece. Keep the viewer's eye focused on your action.
Animator: Jabir Dz
Description: Interaction between JANE and her MOTHER. she looked about her in confusion..
Experience: 2 Years
Time taken: 4 days