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I like that you're taking liberties with Mery, especially with her twirling around at frame 207. In the beginning, though, Mery seems awkward repeatedly swirling her drink around. Very cyclical. You could have cut out about 85 frames before the dialogue began
I love it! Everything looks good except the whole squirrel thing but at the same time I think it's very creative
I definitely love the human movement.
Coffee N Milk~!!! huehuehuehue ~
It's so coool~ xDD Keep it up ya~!! Loving your ideas alot, hehe~ :3 Just one or 2 things would wanna comment on.. The first shake of the cup from the squirrel, seems like hitting on an invisible wall.. Another will be the cup that the girl holding, maybe can be reduce slightly abit or shorten the duration of the cup shaking? Now she's been shaking the cup for quite some time while the other acting, her hands will be tired, i think, haha~ xDD Last will be the last action which she goes lie on the table, maybe can pick either one of the last 2 poses, then just react abit from the pose you pick for the last sentence of the dialogue. hehe~
Gaucelm De Villaret:
This could be funny, but being over-the-top does not automatically make it funny and expressive. Sometimes, it's just being over-the-top. Okay, this could be kinda funny, but it is not very much making a coherent ensemble here.
the woman at the beginning movements is too exaggerated. Should make it more focus on the Squirrel actions. And the squirrel hand should more exaggerate.
The woman turning seems like not necessary. Seems like suddenly dancing.
When she laugh, the shoulder should move more up.
The audio got bg music, but you didn't mention about where the bg music come from.
Anyway, the animation is great!
Craig Joseph Massa:
Really well done! Very fluid movements and poses.
Good posing and body language. Mom has a lot of charm.
Very nice. The loop on the "mom" in the beginning is a little obvious. And I think the twirl is a bit over the top. Otherwise good job :)
Animator: Coffee N Milk
Description: One of the drinker ask another drinker is the 'wine' got alcohol.
Experience: more than 2 year
Time taken: 1 week